2022北京高考英語備考:書面表達之“變”出高分
來源:高考網(wǎng)整理 2022-02-16 12:47:07
一、詞匯的變化
在英語寫作中,考生如能在正確使用基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上,將普通詞匯變化并升級為高級詞匯,就能給文章增添色彩和畫面感,大大提升文章的檔次,從而獲得高分。要做到準(zhǔn)確使用高級詞匯,考生應(yīng)注意以下幾個方面:
1.“語”眾不同,避免人云亦云
在寫作時,考生恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍﹦e人可能想不到的詞匯或表達,會體現(xiàn)出自己的高水平,同時,也會給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺。
(1) I believe that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
→ I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
我相信,身邊有如此優(yōu)秀的朋友,我會變得越來越好。
(2) As a student from China, I have been fond of Chinese painting.
→ As a student from China, I have been keen on Chinese painting.
作為來自中國的學(xué)生,我一直鐘愛中國畫。
。3) I am busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.
→I am occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner (approaching).
我正忙于復(fù)習(xí)功課,因為對于我來說非常重要的高考即將來臨。
2.更新?lián)Q代(棄舊取新),避免重復(fù)
在寫作時,考生應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的單詞或短語,要盡量用貼切多樣的詞語來展示自己的水平,用新穎的詞語代替陳舊的詞語。用詞不同,表達方式迥異,也是高級表達。
。1)There will be many activities to mark this unforgettable occasion including many matches.
→ There will be a wide range of activities to mark this unforgettable occasion including many matches.
為了紀(jì)念這個難忘的時刻,將開展許多活動包括很多比賽。
(2)Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built,a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
→Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up,a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
此外,我們將建一座新的體育館,隨著體育館的興建,各種體育賽事就能舉辦。
3.單詞和短語(詞組),短語(詞組)優(yōu)先
當(dāng)單詞和短語表示同一個意思時,優(yōu)先使用詞組、短語、習(xí)語代替單詞,這不僅能使文章更加生動,增加文采,而且也能展示出考生扎實的語言功底。
。1)First, needless to say, he is good at English.
→First and foremost/To begin(start)with,needless to say, he is good at English.首先,不必說,他擅長英語。
。2)Finally, he has a lot of life experience.
→Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience.
最后,他生活經(jīng)驗豐富。
(3)Therefore, there is no need to worry about our studies—just relax and have a good rest.
→As a consequence (result) / In consequence, there is no need to worry about our studies—just relax and have a good rest.
因此,不必擔(dān)心我們的學(xué)習(xí),放松好好休息吧。
4. 多實少虛,避免空洞
在具備一定詞匯量的條件下,考生使用具體的表達比泛泛而談的內(nèi)容更能引起讀者的共鳴。例如,在描述一個具體的事物或人時,類似a nice /good man 的表達讓人感覺很空洞,考生可以用有個性的、具體的詞來描繪一個人,如kind/warm-hearted(好心的/熱心腸的),easy-going(隨和的),generous(慷慨/大方的)等。
。1)Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross country running race, which attracted many good participants. 上周日,我們學(xué)校舉行五千米越野賽跑,吸引許多好手參賽。
→Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross country running race, which attracted many enthusiastic participants. 上周日,我們學(xué)校舉行五千米越野賽跑,吸引眾多熱情參賽者。
(2) It is a very good film. 這是一部好電影。
→It is a very moving / touching / instructive / romantic / breath-taking film.這是一部感人/有教育意義/浪漫/傷心的電影。
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