2009年高考英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法：短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練.附詳解（7）

　　Sept. 10th Wednesday Fine

　　Today is Teacher's Day. I attended a celebration        1. _______

　　meeting hold by our school. At the meeting，25          2. _______

　　advanced teachers were praised and those had            3. _______

　　completed 30 years of teaching were given medals.       4. _______

　　My the first English teacher was one of those praised.  5. _______

　　After the meeting，my classmates and I went to see them.6. _______

　　Seeing us，the grey-haried teacher looked exciting.

　　When we said we all wanted to be teachers               7. _______

　　and devoted ourselves to education in the future，he    8. _______

　　nodded with satisfaction. He said in firm voice，       9. _______

　　"teaching is a noble job. Man would be stupid with      10. _______

　　education." We all agreed and were greatly encouraged by his words.

　　答案及解析

　　1. Teacher's改為T(mén)eachers'."……（人）的節(jié)日"一般用名詞復(fù)數(shù)表泛指。如： Children's Day，Women's Day等。

　　2. hold改為held.此處為過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)表被動(dòng)關(guān)系。

　　3. had前加who.仔細(xì)分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)便可知此處應(yīng)為定語(yǔ)從句，those或all等詞后只能接who， 不能用that.

　　4. 此行無(wú)錯(cuò)。

　　5. 刪去the.序數(shù)詞前有my等形容詞性物主代詞時(shí)，不需要用定冠詞。

　　6. them改為him.代詞指代應(yīng)一致。根據(jù)下文the grey-haired teacher看出， 此處應(yīng)為him.

　　7. exciting改為excited.人作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，表語(yǔ)一般用過(guò)去分詞； 物作主語(yǔ)則用現(xiàn)在分詞。

　　8. devoted改為devote.根據(jù)句意可知，and后的devote應(yīng)與不定式短語(yǔ)be teachers并列。

　　9. in后加a.in a loud/low voice為固定短語(yǔ)。

　　10. with改為without.介詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)常識(shí)可判斷， 該處想表達(dá)的原意為"沒(méi)有教育， 人類(lèi)將會(huì)愚昧無(wú)知".