2009年高考英語語法：短文改錯專項訓練.附詳解（6）

　　Dear Sir，

　　I'm glad to recommend （推薦） to you my friend Li Ming.

　　Li Ming was born on July 15， in 1974 in Beijing.         1. _______

　　He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.            2. _______

　　When he was in the middle school， he did good in maths， 3. _______

　　physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating   4. _______

　　from No.4 High School， he entered into Beijing           5. _______

　　University study physics. After four years of hard        6. _______

　　work there， he went to the United States for farther     7. _______

　　study. Because of his excellent work， he get a doctor's  8. _______

　　degree in physics this year.He is now in good health

　　but would like to make contributions to our               9. _______

　　country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply.              10. ______

　　Yours truly，Wang Li

　　答案及解析

　　1. 刪去1974前的in.時間狀語是年、月、日的只需用一個介詞；但若是年、月、日、時的，則要用at six thirty， on the morning of May 4th，2001.

　　2. 此行無錯。

　　3. good改為well.固定詞組be good at，do well in意為"在……學得很好".

　　4. fond前加was.動詞謂語殘缺錯誤。fond是形容詞，and引導并列謂語結構，故用詞組was fond of.

　　5. 刪去into.動詞enter是及物動詞，直接接賓語。

　　6. study前加to.此處用不定式短語作目的狀語。

　　7. farther改為further.farther意為"更遠的"，表示實際距離；further意為"深遠的，進一步的"，指抽象概念， 這里為"深造學習"，應用further study.

　　8. get改為got.時態(tài)錯誤。

　　9. but改為and.根據上下文邏輯，前后兩分句為并列遞進關系，而非轉折關系。

　　10. receive改為receiving.look forward to中的to為介詞，后面應接名詞或動名詞。